Many people today would argue that cinemas are becoming irrelevant due to new streaming services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this present world viewpoint of individuals towards Cinema arechanging Certain people beleivesthat watching
Shows and movies on a streaming platform is relevant then film theaters I partially agree with this and I intend to state my reasons with suitable examplesin upcoming paragraphs
To begin with there are several reasons why people Prefer online platforms rather than theaters firstly they are more convinient than theaters If people want to watch a show or a program they can watch it any where any time To cite an example If we are away from a City or town, we want to trovl a lot to find a theater for watching a movie But in the case of OTI Platforms
People can simply watch movies from their laptops or mobile phones and also they can save their time and travel. Secondly using onone centers reduce people's Cost . The online streaming sites like hotstar netflix amazon and so only needs a monthly subscription starting from 199 rupees for an entired month while. this amount is same for watching one movie from a theater.
However, when people uses online platforms for viewing contants they cannotpossibly getanexperiencethat provided by theaters In theater they use enormous screen and high quality speakers . so viewers can experience the film at It's fullest . But in the case of online platforms this experience is not possible . furthermore, a film theater is filled with huge crowd those who screams Claps laughs according to the movie watching a Show in middle of these people are entirely different ambience than viewing it from online.
while drawing into the conclusion online streaming plat forms, have it's own merits like less Cost Convinient nature of viewing a show and so on . But Watching a movie from a theater is different because of the actions of the crowd and the cinematic experience Provided by the theater .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02265372168 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68682104105 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550161812298 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.431820124 49.4020404114 420% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.2 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0596436999113 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212512948192 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0211794916143 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0409291990622 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182357627682 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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