Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?
There is no doubt that the excessive used of plastic as a material for bottles and goods is harmful to the environment. This essay will outline the consequences of this problem as well as the way to resolve it.
First of all, one of the detrimental effect is that plastic pollution poses a significant threat to the wildlife and individuals as a viable transporter of toxic additives and pathogens. When microplastics end up on marine life, they can bind with persistent organic toxin fed by aquatic animals. Plastic Soup Foundation presents that PCBs (Polychlorinated biphenyls) can be accumulated in animal fats resulting children growth retardation in the long-term consumption. Furthermore, imbalance plastic wastes can contaminate agricultural soils reducing its fertility. As reported by Environmental Sciences Europe, their nanoparticle is hardly degraded by decomposer altering soil structure and declining eater-holding capacity.
Regarding the aforementioned results, a remarkable solution can be implemented through enacting innovative legislation as Singapore’s government. Along with Zero Waste Masterplan, they require residents to sort waste collecting over 3000 tons of waste that will generate waste-to-energy (WTE) plant producing their electricity daily. Moreover, people can be part of agents in environmental change by accustoming eco-friendly behaviour. National Geographics has been presents that using reusable bottle and shopping bag can cut down on the amount of litter on land and in the ocean as well as increasing their responsibility to the world.
To sum up, several remarkable effects reveal due to an issue of highly use of plastic including infectious disease spread on living things and land contamination. However, this can be tackled by implementing environmental regulation and accelerating individual’s habits by reusing plastic bag.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, no doubt, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84727272727 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4826303349 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676363636364 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3010098153 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249377319829 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876024612617 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705745853574 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1582389019 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579776360745 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.65 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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