Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment.
What damage does plastic do to the environment?
What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?
Environmental protection is one of the urgent problems being addressed by both the government and individuals. In addition to damaging soil, reducing a large amount of trash in living areas is also detrimental to people's health. In this essay, I will discuss this problem.
It is acceptable that the more population increases, the more polluted the environment is. To meet the demands of customers, many plastic packaged products are produced. Many lands cannot be planted for trees due to over 1 century of plastic dissolving in the soil. Moreover, things made of plastic make the water dirty. People directly dispose of hundreds of tons of garbage in the water every day. Polluted water not only kills fish, marine plants and creatures in rivers and oceans, but is also a contributing factor to causing people’s cancers as well.
Protection of the environment should therefore be the responsibility of both individuals and authorities. In order to prevent the consumption of plastic packaging products, local leaders must introduce laws that force plastic factories and businesses to reduce their use. The government must also run programs or talk shows about the environment on social media to demonstrate harmful effects on people and encourage people to consume less packaging.
In conclusion, protecting the environment from pollution with plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging is the responsibility of both the government and individuals. This requires the government to pursue a long-term strategy and to raise public awareness about it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun plastic seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much plastic', 'a good deal of plastic'.
Suggestion: much plastic; a good deal of plastic
...t is. To meet the demands of customers, many plastic packaged products are produced. Many la...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43852459016 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00546789617 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614754098361 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9772168526 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359147308496 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111361534898 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101838442469 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213925509484 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085083607809 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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