In many situations, people who break the law should be warned instead of punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People hold differing views about whether cautioning or keeping in prison is preferable for the battle against criminals. From my own point of view, those two options are of equal significance in dealing with crime in particular circumstances.
On the one hand, some individuals argue that warning could be considered socially and humanely appropriate for various justifications, chief of which is that it might be possible for those committing petty crimes such as shoplifting and breaking speed limit an opportunity to reform. To explain, if people who break the law without serious damage to any individual and the society are given prison sentence, there would be a criminal record on their personal profile, which deters them from integrating with the society and landing a job after being released. As a result, being discriminated against and isolated might put ex-prisoners at risk of potential recidivism. Therefore, unnecessarily putting a petty criminal behind the bars would contribute to ruining one’s future, as well as the higher crime rate.
On the other hand, under certain circumstances, severe punishments, including prison sentence, is the best solution to hinder one’s possibility of posing threats to members of society. As a matter of fact, somebody who takes illegal actions which results in a grave loss of human lives and properties, need to serve an amount of time in prison. Only then, he will no longer be a danger to social well-being. To exemplify, for people who are vicious enough to murder intentionally, the warnings might make no sense and they might hold misconceptions that murdering is socially forgivable. Hence, they are likely to resort to violence the next time they encounter a conflict with others.
To sum up, the implementation of both warning and heavy punishment would work based on the level of severity of crimes. While cautioning is more suitable for minimal crimes, being kept in jail would be the most useful choice for cruelty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, in particular, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.225 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94384952061 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634375 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9487440597 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.615384615 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140604681197 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441452103176 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406661920401 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770698224476 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397904196836 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.