Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions
In recent times, a majority of large urban areas have grown at an alarming rate. Although there are some potential consequences that this trend might cause for the young generations living in metropolis around the globe, various solutions can be held to alleviate those issues.
On the one hand, several burdensome difficulties for the youth are likely to arise as a result of the fast-growing major cities, chief of which is the exposure to the noise pollution. As a matter of fact, the urban regions are developing dramatically is synonymous with the considerable rise in the construction of tall buildings, factories, apartments, and the unbelievably huge number of vehicles in the roads, especially in peak hours. In particular, noise with high levels of sound is emitted from the consistent manufacture in factories as well as the lively way of living of the city residents. Consequently, this trend leads to the serious noise pollution in the urban area, and it might have deleterious effects on the young individuals' well-being, such as the loss of concentration is the lessons at schools or the hearing deterioration by the prolonged contact with the noise. By way of illustration, some reports have revealed that traffic noise in Hanoi in peak hours could reach 150 decibels, which exceeds the level of noise that is considered safe to human.
On the other hand, some feasible measures could be done to mitigate the aforementioned problems. One of the most efficacious solutions is that the authorities should allocate more funds to the mass transit system in big cities. In fact, if people rely more on the public means of transport, they will utilize their private vehicles less, which results in the significant drop in the number of traffic on the roads, especially during rush hours, hence the eminent reduction in the level of noise in urban areas. For example, Danang, a great metropolis, used to be a noise pollution hotspot in Vietnam. Nevertheless, for the last four years, the government has been successful in making efforts to persuade Danang dwellers to leave their cars home and use city buses by simply making bus services free of charge. Therefore, only six months after the implementation of this policy, Danang experienced a dramatic decline of the level of traffic noise.
In conclusion, the young people would be vulnerable to the excessive level of noise pollution by the growth at a breakneck pace in urban regions. However, the authority can take some measures to mitigate that issue, including the allocation to improve the public transport system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09905660377 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89719423323 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554245283019 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4013669674 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.133333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2666666667 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8666666667 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152396462633 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457922340148 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403909414602 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907399944691 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024846958285 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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