The diagrams show a museum and its sorroundings in 1990 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagrams show a museum and its sorroundings in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates a museum map and the changes between two decades from 1990 to 2010. Overall, there are differences in the museum map in two decades and the gardens are the widest arena in the museum.

The museum's indoor rooms consist of three rooms, which are a store room, exhibition room, and shop. In the two decades, the width of the store room and exhibition room were still the same. However, the shop is the only one area that was also enlarged to be wider aside in 2010. Furthermore in 2010, the outdoor arena layout in museum was also restructured, such as a car park.

In 1990, the car park sector was located among two garden lands. It was expanded broader through the garden after two decades. Moreover, there was also a cottage building near the main road in 1990, however the building was turned into a cafe in 2010.

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