Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence,while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways
What is your opinion?
Most people think that success is measured by the intelligence of the person or how hard they work but like they say “work smarter not harder” so in this essay we will discuss the two opinions and how can intelligence be measured in other ways.
Some people measure their success with how smart they are and how hard they work on exams, and carries and when they have a goal they achieve it which is a very good thing to nail your goals and work or study hard, like Einstein he was a very successful and important character that was known for his intelligence and his ability to change the subject’s because of how smart he was.
People don’t really agree with everything and everyone have a different opinion and some people measure success with their homes, carriers and their children, if their in a stable home and have a happy marriage with a good children, or when they are excellent and work hard at their jobs they even get a raise, and when a person is so proud of his child they take it as if it’s their own, one of those thing can be to someone a huge success.
In conclude everyone has their reasons and believes but people will not agree on one thing in everything, people can be very smart and achieve anything they want but success will never be a real success if the person doesn’t believe in themselves and believe they can achieve what they want eventually, In my opinion I think it doesn’t matter how smart, there’s always something you’ll be good and successful at even if it’s simple.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57608695652 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37202095413 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.062475605 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 315.75 106.682146367 296% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.0 20.7667163134 332% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265796541952 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184843250383 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970600611151 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184843250383 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970600611151 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.6 13.0946893788 264% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.8 11.3001002004 246% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.47 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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