In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
With the development of technology, there are many ways that people can choose to read. It is common for people to read online or paper books. While some people prefer to read printed newspapers or books, I firmly believe that more and more people read online instead of buying printed materials.
There are three reasons why less and less people buy printed newspapers or books. Firstly, printed books are so expensive that only some people can afford it, which means that the poor cannot have chance to learn more knowledge. For example, in the ancient time, only the nobility can read printed books because it is so expensive that poor people cannot buy. Secondly, it is unconvenient for people to carry the printed newspapers or books when they go outside or travel. Some masterwork are so heavy that people cannot carry out and just read it at one stable place, which is limited the chance of people exchange their opinion. Thirdly, printed newspapers or books can increase environment problems. This is because many printed material use wood and water to make it, which means that the tree will be cut and use lots of water, thereby increasing pollution problems and damaging our environment.
I believe that more and more people will choose to read online. It is clear that there are many free books and news you can read online, which means that everyone have chance to get more knowledge and change their life, thereby making our society fairer. Meanwhile, reading online is very handy. We can use mobile phone to read all the thing we want in everywhere and every time, which means that we can share our opinion with our friends or other people. It can improve the information communication. Moreover, e-books or online news is more environmental-friendly. This is because digital newspapers or books make by plastic, steel and other materials but not wood, which means that less trees will cut in the future, thereby protecting our environment.
In conclusion, I think more and more people choose to read online instead of buying printed newspapers or books in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... problems and damaging our environment. I believe that more and more people will...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun trees is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...aterials but not wood, which means that less trees will cut in the future, thereby p...
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...re, thereby protecting our environment. In conclusion, I think more and more peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90449438202 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5714815494 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449438202247 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9090207631 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225473293318 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863433178756 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423901397404 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155707380519 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136557480012 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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