Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The idea that people attain their goals mainly depend on luck is controversial. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this point. Reaching the goals depends on many factors, not only by good fortune.
On the one hand, the success levels are according to the goal commitment and studiousness of people. In any life’s aspects, achieving gold processes are always difficult with many obstacles. As a result, success is the final present for people with high consistency with their aims. For example, Nick Vujicic, a famous inspirer with a rare disease resulted in an absence of four limbs. However, with his optimistic mind, he overcame his difficulties and graduated college with flying colours. At present, he has his own family with two normal children and travels around the world to motivate people through his stories, he also publishes books about his life.
On the other hand, luck is important but not the crucial factor, people who are over-reliant on luck rearly make their dream come true. It is true that before any examination, students with not careful prepair usually fail the exam. Furthermore, person who win lottery once in their life thanks to their fortune without any effort will always looking for win again. As a result, they would not have desire to commit to the office and all the money they earn would be become an expenditure for lottery tickets.
In conclusion, the top of priority needs for achiving goals are industriousness and persistence in people, not by their luck.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...tant but not the crucial factor, people who are over-reliant on luck rearly make their ...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'look'
Suggestion: look
... fortune without any effort will always looking for win again. As a result, they would ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03187250996 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6206782475 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641434262948 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2415446102 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2142857143 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0883316830776 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342839372983 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385696342764 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665369873132 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259548125498 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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