the plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams depict modifications to Porth Harbour between 2000 and today.
Overall, the area has a number of significant changes, the most important of which are the construction of some buildings.
Looking at the details, there is a new path connecting directly from Main Road to the Car Park, and the road connecting the Car Park and the Road has disappeared. Besides, the Road has a new way to connect to a Hotel, where used to be the disused Castle.
Looking at the details, there are several new infrastructures here. A new place for Showers and toilets has been built in the North of the larger Car Park. The Marina and the Fishing boast have exchanged their locations, and a new Dock has been built to allow more boats to land in. In addition, a new area for Cafes and shops has been built next to the Lifeboat, and the Public beach has become a Private beach, which is only for people in the Hotel next to it.
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- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to these places 67
- Some people think that competition at work at school and in daily life is a good thing others believe that we should try to cooperate more rather than competing against each other Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne Australia for the period 2000 to 2020 Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison whe 84
- The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend Do you agree or disagree 61
- Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., where used to be the disused Castle. Looking at the details, there are severa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5119047619 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53266639986 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4089833242 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0656851304557 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345866481733 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468650890701 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528014880597 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573193553409 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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