The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking
I agree that mobile also so be banned if we was with family or friend or even if we where in a beautiful place and nature place which include rivers, trees, flowers and other places in or world and environment that the phone should be banned in it .
Mobile should be banned like smoke and we say smoking here between other things because they have many negative similarities ,such as smoking is dangerous on your healthy and body the mobile is same ass it because if you sit at your mobile all the time you will not think to eat or drink also you will not give your body his right in sleeping.Catching the mobile all the time is annoying every one around you and you are telling them when you are catching the mobile that you don't matter to me and this heart many people .Also sitting at mobile in family day or friends or when you are setting with your brothers can make you an depressed and antisocial person and sad person and you can't know more about your family and be happy with them.
I have a friend that always at her mobile every were and every time even every second and she don't sit with her family she don't eat well we try to help her. One day her parents take her phone and they went out to the forest to make a camping family day she was annoyed and sad at the first of the trip but when they arrive and she play with her brothers and sister ,cook with her mom, build the tent , and eat the beautiful food in one table with her family without mobile she told me that it was the best day ever.
In conclusion we should stop catching mobiles all the time and enjoy our moments so all the world should banned mobile from every place except work malls streets and others places that we need to use mobiles on it but at nature places and family and friend place the mobile should be banned .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 10.4138276553 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26486486486 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99386678276 2.80592935109 71% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42972972973 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 216.199496351 49.4020404114 438% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.0 106.682146367 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.6666666667 20.7667163134 297% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377587099423 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215105068546 0.084324248473 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146267753762 0.0667982634062 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284996173176 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185531385744 0.056905535591 326% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.5 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.32 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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