In order for any work of art - for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song - to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
Author stresses to have merit the art must be understandable to most people, to which I do not completely agree. Although there might be some credibility to the postulate, I do not abide by it completely.
Firstly, having merit is subjective. It is almost impossible to have a merit score of a art. The art might be dealing with some of the orthodox opinions which might degrade the merit. This does not necessarily mean that the art wasn't of any merit. It could potentially be just that most people had hard time understanding the orthodox opinion that the artist has that conflicts with their own opinions. Therefore, the arts merit is just not defined by how people take it.
People have different tastes and predilections which might affect their judgement of a piece of art. Given the number of different opinions people have, its very unlikely for the artist to make majority of people understand. Lets suppose for example, art that uses a new style of painting, these paintings are unique and display the contemporary nature of todays world. There would definitely be individuals who appreciate the innovative form of art but does it comprise of the majority of art lovers ? Mostly not. Considering another example of movies, a movie with perfect acting, good direction, impeccable editing, apt setting but with not so enticing storyline. Most people would criticise the movie as it didn't have good storyline, while the keen observers could applaud the other immaculate aspects of the movie, that is worth the merit.
Moreover, there is a timeline of art. An art could be overly popular in 20th century because of the changes it brought to the complete industry and thus hold merit. At the same time this art could loose its potential merit in 21st century where we see just the art and not its history and the changes it brought with it. Consider for example, the music industry, in early stages of this industry the musicians used simple music tones and soothing melodies. But then the industry was overturned by innovative musicians who mixed and matched different tempos to create austere music. Now these musician and there music might not hold much merit as it wasnt as per most peoples predilection but would speak much about the transition. The way it transformed the current music industry and tastes hold much more importance than it did at the time it was launched. Thus, the time at which the art was created matters a lot.
Furthermore, some of these artforms are open ended, they do not just reflect the artists view but also tries to play with viewers imagination. This open endedness has nothing to do with true understanding of the art but more about how relatable it is to a person. An art could be understood differently to different person and that makes the art speak to majority of individual without circumscribing them to a particular understand. Thus the relatability and personal interpretation of an art holds more credit over proper understanding of an artform.
The fact that art in any form hold immense potential to change peoples opinions, how they perceive and react, should not be overshadowed. These artforms expose the individuals to different opinions, making people ponder over their own opinions. They express stories of past and present that were hidden from plain sight, making it known to mankind. Now if these stories, opinions are cryptic and hidden, would make less of an impact on an individul. Thus it is very important that these messages are passed to people without much pondering on the artform.
Therefore, even tho easily understood artform holds power to change society, the merit of an artform cannot be solely decided over how understandable the artform is.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3114.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 626.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97444089457 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00199880112 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72684782261 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4696485623 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 978.3 704.065955056 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3768696365 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1851851852 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288916621098 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883321449152 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627409121413 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154562035015 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793253099549 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 100.480337079 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.