It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is debatable that depositing money for the future is necessary for every person, especially the youth generation. While there are some negative development of these consequences, I believe that savings for the future are essential for both juvenile and adult people in terms of sustaining oneself in difficult situations, assisting in executing the plan, and limiting demands.
There are numerous benefits to saving money for the future. First of all, it helps to withstand various arduous situations. As the future is not predictable, any kinds of unexpected situations can come. Savings can help to overcome these circumstances. For example, in natural disasters such as drought, most people face different problems and suffer money trouble. At that time, savings money can help them.
Secondly, deposits of money enhance the chances of fulfilling the future plan. Everyone has different plans for the forthcoming and sometimes it turns difficult due to sufficient wealth. Reserving assets for a long time can assist in completing the plan. Moreover, cash reserve for a certain time limits the person's demand and makes him a frugal person.
However, there are some drawbacks of depositing income such as it reduces the focus on the present. While the present is more important than the future, savings make a person careless for the present time. As a result, the young generation cannot build themself more strong and skillful. Excessively thinking for the future enervate to organize the present and this will affect badly in future.
In conclusion, thinking and preparing for the future is highly needed for all ages people in terms of tackling any unavoidable situations and make the career smother and frictionless. Although it has several advantages, excessive focus for destiny can disrupt the present. So everyone needs to balance the present and future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[5]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'there are some negatives'?
Suggestion: there are some negatives
... especially the youth generation. While there are some negative development of these consequences, I be...
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Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...tive development of these consequences, I believe that savings for the future are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35135135135 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76307569386 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9314211134 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3684210526 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5789473684 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301940994955 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956208886326 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622518227952 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176263116125 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361289339174 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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