People spend too much time at work and they seldom have time for their personal life. Discuss the issue and support your answer with examples?
An increasing trend in today's world is the emergence of argument about the work load. This essay will discuss the issues concerned with the notion that too much time at work affects your personal life, using a practical approach.
At the outset there are several arguments in favor of my stance, the most significant one includes not only the betterment of society but also the growth of every individual on the planet. Thanks to the benefits offered, one can not only attain greater success but can also enhance his productivity, efficiency and quality of life with greater ease. Other factors impacted by over work are health, lifestyle, and personal life.
Furthermore, too much work can leads to many health problems related to nervous system, heart and eyes. People who are involved in hard work for long time have poor relationships. People are suffering from communication problems with their peers and relatives due to spending too much time at work and as a result they are facing problems like depression, anxiety, and migrain. Behavioral, mental, and social issues can also be taken into account. Therefore, there must be a balance in one's office and personal life. Moreover, people is Europe, America and Australia are suffering from personal issues in their lives due to spending their whole day in offices or work places.
To conclude, from my perspective, government of Australia is taking great initiative in educating its citizens against the negative impacts of the statement. Citizens are encouraged to adhere to applicable laws and regulations related to working hours, in order to bring prosperity, efficiency, productivity, and development of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23420074349 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77731244826 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613382899628 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9424928304 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384634067486 0.242375264174 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118917828532 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114966023281 0.071462118173 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198788408416 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1493213413 0.0609392437508 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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