Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in a rural area. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although some individuals prefer to live in megacities, some others believe living in a country is the best. Both individuals have some rational reasons which will be discussed in the following.
The first group declared two main reasons. Firstly, all amenities have been provided in the big cities. To exemplify, the best health care system s, educations, supermarkets, accommodations have been established in the cities. Moreover, individuals can find a suitable job in a best company and upgrade their lifestyle. Furthermore, in the leisure time, people can utilize a variety of amazing entertainments which has been facilitated in their environment.
Nevertheless, some people opine the best life can be provided in rural area because of some reasons. At first, there is no air pollution in the village. Definitely, the clean air keeps you healthier. Moreover, instead of inconvenience noisy such as vehicle’s born in traffic, the nature sound increases the peace in your soul. Furthermore, rural people have healthy diet more than people in cities. In fact, individual in the megacities prefer to consume packed, canned and processed food as they are more accessible and comfortable.
To conclude, although both groups have some rational reasons, in my opinion, today, in the modern world, people have to live in megacities to promote their work. However, to get rid any anxiety, they need to spend their vacation in the rural area to make them refreshed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30042918455 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98026566918 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596566523605 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4507483074 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276730540531 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789037463028 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956203672207 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175605510755 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097585480506 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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