Some people think the manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some individuals believe manufacturers and malls should reduce the number of packaged items sold, while others contend that individuals should make an effort to purchase products with minimal packaging. In my opinion, the previous concept suggested that the problem of overpacking can only be solved by factories and retailers reducing excessive packaging.
There are individuals who think that it is the responsibility of the producers to reduce the excessive consumption of packaging. This occurs when factories overpackage products, forcing shopping malls to sell them, luring consumers to buy and resulting in excessive packaging. The problem can only be properly dealt with by stopping the excessive packaging of products in factories and shopping malls.
On the other hand, others argue that changing customers' purchasing behaviors is the solution to reduce excessive packaging. Consumers must fully comprehend the downsides of excessive packaging and not to purchase products with multiple layers of packaging in order to effectively tackle the overpackaging issue. If many customers still won't purchase minimally packaged items, shopping centers have to keep offering products with excessive packaging to sustain their sales and income. For instance, a local government official states that local stores have been told not to sell products with excessive packaging, causing many shops to lose a large amount of money as customers are unwilling to buy products without appealing packaging. Thus, choosing to decrease usage of packaged items is the main strategy to tackle this issue.
In conclusion, while there may be different opinions on who should be responsible for reducing packaging, believing that only manufacturers and shopping malls have the capability to accomplish this objective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72862453532 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9279712859 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527881040892 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2397674586 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.090909091 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306741935394 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123953744021 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646933679697 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191885982975 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323377043369 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.