The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
The diagram presents the method of production of bricks for the construction industry
It is clear that there are 7 distinct stages in the whole brick-producing process, beginning with digging in clay, and ending with the delivery of bricks to customers.
At the first stage, the clay is dug up by a huge digger. Then, to get rid of large unwanted pieces of clay, clay is placed on a metal grid so that the small pieces drop onto the roller. After that, sand and water are added to the small pieces of clay and this will help bricks to get in shape by the wire cutter or the mould.
When the bricks are shaped, they move to a drying oven for 24 to 48 hours to dry. The next stage is that bricks are fired in a kiln at a moderate temperature from 200c to 980c. Afterwards they continue to be heated at a higher temperature from 870c to 1300c. Subsequently, the bricks are put in a cooling chamber for 48hrs to 72hrs, then they go through the packaging process. Finally, after all these stages the bricks are being delivered to the construction sector.
- Innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth Some argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues Discuss both sides and give your opinion 11
- Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish Others however argue that it has only made people busier 78
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry 78
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- The diagram details the process of making leather products Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43298969072 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4960165948 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582474226804 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.697371684 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5555555556 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201711581755 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767840924069 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856904645274 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151964895029 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103582551568 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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