The computer is widely used in education and some people think that teachers will not play important roles in the classroom.
The computer is so very important to everybody because we know is era globalization. People can get information by internet. We know in internet much information. Everybody uses internet to look for a lesson. More all, long time ago they looked for information or lesson just read in book, now people can easy to look for it. Now is modern technology where, people more like shear in internet than book because with it we can easy to look for information than book or newspaper.
Some people agree about statement because some people thinks firstly, internet is prepare all of information about anything. With internet, some people doesn't different to look for information and lesson. Secondly, some people thinks that teachers in Indonesian don’t have many times to always teach them, with the internet in world to makes students easy to look for information about anything. Thirdly, some people think if they look for information in internet, it is very cheaper than we buy some books. Lastly, with internet they can easy to bring in everyplace because we know is era globalization where there is smartphone, blackberry, Samsung, apple and anything which capable to save of all information. More all in internet there is social media to communication with other not just in country but in abroad also, so with internet they don’t need teacher for teach them.
But I disagree about statement because firstly, I think internet is prepare of all information but we must remember that in internet there isn't about character education which teach us about moral and culture also. If students choose internet to be teacher it can makes them bad character because we know in internet there is information which isn't important for us. Secondly, if teachers have difficult time, they can solve problem with discuss with their friend and then although in internet prepare of all information we must remember that in internet there isn't protect to saves students from bad moral or information which makes them don’t care about other.
In conclusion, I disagree about the statement, I mind teachers are very important to students because they don’t just teach about knowledge but there is education character to communication with other in their live and future.
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because we know is era globalization
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now people can easy to look for it.
now people can easily look for it.
Sentence: Some people agree about statement because some people thinks firstly, internet is prepare all of information about anything.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and prepare
Sentence: Secondly, some people thinks that teachers in Indonesian don't have many times to always teach them, with the internet in world to makes students easy to look for information about anything.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace thinks with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to to and makes
Sentence: Lastly, with internet they can easy to bring in everyplace because we know is era globalization where there is smartphone, blackberry, Samsung, apple and anything which capable to save of all information.
Description: The fragment which capable to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace capable with adverb
Sentence: More all in internet there is social media to communication with other not just in country but in abroad also, so with internet they don't need teacher for teach them.
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Suggestion: Refer to for and teach
Sentence: But I disagree about statement because firstly, I think internet is prepare of all information but we must remember that in internet there isn't about character education which teach us about moral and culture also.
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Suggestion: Refer to is and prepare
Description: The fragment which teach us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace teach with verb, past tense
Sentence: If students choose internet to be teacher it can makes them bad character because we know in internet there is information which isn't important for us.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to can and makes
Sentence: Secondly, if teachers have difficult time, they can solve problem with discuss with their friend and then although in internet prepare of all information we must remember that in internet there isn't protect to saves students from bad moral or information which makes them don't care about other.
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Suggestion: Refer to with and discuss
Description: The fragment internet prepare of is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace prepare with verb, past participle
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 12 2
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Score: 3.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 12 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 380 350
No. of Characters: 1839 1500
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.415 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.839 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.658 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 120 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.148 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.468 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.621 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.341 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5