More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplaces. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the past few decades, science and technology have been developing at a fascinating speed and our life style have transformed along with it. This contributes to the reality that working at home is a symbol of commercialization and modernization. Some people are of the opinion that this phenomenon benefits both the workers and their families, whereas others are opposed to it. Personally, I support the former.
Admittedly, there are certain drawbacks of working at home, and the issue of stress is one of them. To be specific, as a result of bring work to home, employees are highly likely to ...
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"Sentence: Yet, as far as I am concerned, its benefits overweigh its negative effects.
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I guess that the writer wanted to write "outweigh" rather than "overweight".
Sentence: Yet, as far as I am concerned, its benefits overweigh its negative effects.
Error: overweigh Suggestion: overweight
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