It is important for all cities and towns to have large outdoor public spaces, such as parks or squares. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent years, many nations are showing great interest on constructing public spaces such as parks and squares across all major cities and towns. It is argued by many that public spaces are extremely beneficial to the modern lifestyle. However, some people claims that governments are wasting huge amount of reserves for construction and maintenance of gardens which are useless. I believe that public spaces should be available in every city and town.
First and foremost reason is public parks should be built in all towns and metros for the sake of improving public's health. Nowadays, most of the people are having hectic day-to-day schedules and working harder and harder to survive in this cut-throat competitive world. Moreover, people are travelling long distances to commute their work spaces and breathing polluted air. Therefore, having public parks not only provides a place for individuals to walk and do exercises in a beautiful green area, they can also take fresh air, relax and maintain physical fitness.
Secondly, with the tremendous improvements in communication, most of the individuals are spending very less time to interact with society. Having easy access to squares helps people to get involved in different cultural programs and showcase their unique talents. Moreover, most of the community halls are built in such way to publicize the native culture. As a result, plazas help to improve individual social well-being and also preserve culture for future generations.
In conclusion, I once again reaffirm that public places should be built and continued for the benefit of residents health and preservation of culture. I believe the more number of public spaces makes the people life joyful and healthy.
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Some believe it is important…
Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, nowadays establishment of huge public parks is increasing dramatically all across the world.A section of society believes that there is dire need to build spacious community centres not only for social development but also for mental and physical well being of society.
To commence with, spacious malls and community halls allow masses to become socialize in to order to enhance their social skills.At these places people can interact with each other and learn several skills such as team work coordination, cooperation and cultural and traditional values of other religions.For example,A survey is conducted by indian cultural ministry , 45% of indian society attain profound knowledge of different cultures and team work ability,who usually went into community centres of their towns.Hence, public spaces give an opportunity to individuals to acquire interpersonal and social skills.
Another major contributing factor, though,more importantly,for establishment of huge health clubs,Yoga centres,Gyms and so on.As these sites encourage masses to do workout and release their mental stress and build their physique in proper shape,by adopting this routine masses can abstain themselves from plethora of severe diseases,those are most prevalent in this modern era due to the sedentary life style of individuals such as heart stroke, diabetes, Hypertension, depression and anxiety.for instance, A study is being conducted by University of Oxford,which sates that 58% peoole in India are less prone to a cardiac failure,who regularly visited health clubs and yoga centres those were developed by indian government.Hence, individuals can improve their health if they persistently visit health care centers.
In conclusion,once again i reaffirm my position by saying that there is nothing harm in development and creation of outdoor public spaces,where they not only learn social skill but also become health conscious.Therefore,we can say these spaces prove an asset not liability to government.
First and foremost reason is public parks should be built in all towns and metros for the sake of improving public's health
The first and foremost reason is that public parks should be built in all towns and metros for the sake of improving public's health
having public parks not only provides a place for individuals to walk and do exercises in a beautiful green area, they can also take fresh air, relax and maintain physical fitness.
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in such way to publicize the native culture.
in such a way to publicize the native culture.
Sentence: In conclusion, I once again reaffirm that public places should be built and continued for the benefit of residents health and preservation of culture.
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Sentence: I believe the more number of public spaces makes the people life joyful and healthy.
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