The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain.

The bar chart illustrates spending of fast foods by three different income categories in Britain.
The bar chart illustrates the spending of fast foods by three different income categories in Britain.

the hightest proportion of high income brackets who said that they enjoyed hamburgers.
the hightest proportion of high income brackets said that they enjoyed hamburgers.

The relivant for low income groups,at about a third and 14% in term.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence?

Next comes Average income and Low income brackets are not quite as high as that,at to a low of 17%.
Description: two verbs in one sentence. can you re-write this sentence?

Sentence: According to the bar chart,the hightest proportion of high income brackets who said that they enjoyed hamburgers.
Error: hightest Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: The relivant for low income groups,at about a third and 14 in term.
Error: relivant Suggestion: relevant

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Minimum 150 words wanted

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