Animal rights are the most importance , advantages and disadvantages.
Undoubtedly, no one can abnegate that animals are important creatures of nature. Animals also play a vital role in human life also. They also contribute to the beauty and balance of the ecosystem. However, one section of the society argue that animals should not be exploited by people and they should have the same rights as humans, while other argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs like food and research.
To initiate, there are multiple reasons that people belief that animals can be used for the benefit of mankind. The first and foremost reason is that human are the highest of the creatures in hierarchy. Another factor is that some animals skin also used to make material for clothing industry. The major factor is working behind that in some countries human are totally depend on sea food and flesh meat. Many kinds of medicine produce and find to cures for diseases through animals. Animals mostly use for reduce risks for humans in science experiments.
Diving deeper into the topic, on other hand some people argue that like humans, animals should have to right to live. Government should take some serious steps to control/curb shoot and kill animals for pleasure and enjoyment. By this, endangered species of animals diminish from earth. To make the balance of environment it is necessary to protect animals. Government also save its huge money which is spending on experiments when there is no output from some experiments. To kill animals for traditions, give strength to the traditional believes. We always hear that excess of everything is bad. Population of animals should be controlled to maintain balance.
Overall, animals should be treated like humans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ls also play a vital role in human life also. They also contribute to the beauty and...
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Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be used for the benefit of mankind. The first and foremost reason is that human ...
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Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...hat in some countries human are totally depend on sea food and flesh meat. Many kinds ...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...tions, give strength to the traditional believes. We always hear that excess of everythi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09252669039 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48901284945 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55871886121 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4075987546 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3157894737 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7894736842 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.10526315789 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194867185303 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058856192833 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511549228466 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118097503789 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340376217123 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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