The Impact of the Interner on Kids
The development of technology gave us vast access to the Internet. The modern era is mainly occupied by computers and the internet that gave us a convenient living. Making our life more organized, systematic, simple, efficient, and hassle-free.
The internet plays a significant part in making our lives more efficient, however, the presence of the internet can enslave the current generation of children if unattended by their parents or guardian. Pew Research Centre has proven that 60% of kids are on the internet everyday and over the last decade the percentage of kids in social media rises to 20%. There is a risk that should be considered for kids who are using the internet. They are vulnerable to different kinds of influences the internet may bring. It affects their vision and increases fat that can lead to obesity. Sitting long hours staring at the screen lessened their physical activity and barely make time to play outdoors. As a result, they don’t interact more with other people that can affect their social skills making them introverted. It can also affect the growth of the child that can lead to future complications. Setting specific downtime for gadgets and balancing their activities will be useful in forming their holistic being.
The privileges internet provide us since the day it was invented was indeed remarkable. It will imprint in our history and continue to advance as generations pass by. However, the drawbacks can damage life if isolated with children’s maintenance only. The elder around them is responsible for providing the right usage of the internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...en that 60% of kids are on the internet everyday and over the last decade the percentage...
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Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'privileges'' or 'privilege's'?
Suggestion: privileges'; privilege's
...n forming their holistic being. The privileges internet provide us since the day it wa...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding elder'?
Suggestion: The surrounding elder
...lated with children’s maintenance only. The elder around them is responsible for providing the right ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15325670498 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74772753487 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7068076896 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0625 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4375 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0482353406319 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0165402338522 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444898762805 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0215811877121 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305204083545 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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