Due to Industrialization a lot of people migrated to developed countries which effected the lifestyle and caused major problems in developled countries. When a large amount of people migrate to any countires, a lot of issues may arises. This issue will further discuss the problem and solutions to overcome those problems and then deduce a logical conclusion.
To begin with, People migrate to developed countires for better lifesyle and for better work opportinities. This generates a high inflow of people. When these people reach those cities they would need a place to live, food and water supply. If the city do not have resources then the people and administration would face the problems. Apart from that, they people coming would also bring the different types of illness along with them.
As migration of the people would grow the city size and its population, city adminstratios need to find a system to forcast the requirement for the new homes and the food supply. Apart from that, City administrator should setup a weekly health camp in the immigrated peoples area, so that the early illness could be identifies in advanced.
To concluded, I would like to recapitualte that as the industrialization grow so does the population of the city as well, hence, the city administration need to forcast the changes and should plan for problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould face the problems. Apart from that, they people coming would also bring the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, then, well, apart from, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09417040359 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95454106009 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565022421525 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7476078851 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.272727273 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210222502053 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884328613184 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11431185459 0.071462118173 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126910254151 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123516227232 0.0609392437508 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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