The phrase itself depicts that industrialization is leading to issues in developed countries. Here, we are going to discuss the problems and its solutions to overcome these issues.
Firstly, the issue is the number of jobs that are not as per the demand. There is a huge gap between demand and supply. Recently, a survey showed there is an unemployment rate of 5.6% in Australia. To overcome this, I may suggest that a quota of people should be migrated based on skills or nature of the business. Another solution can be to allow only a certain category of people who can be of help in the development of the country.
Secondly, there is no proper infrastructure to accommodate the increasing population of the country. Therefore, instead of increasing skilled migration, they may permit more tourist visas. This will help in the economic, financial and infrastructural growth of the country.
Last but not the least, the unhealthy environment is increasing due to carbon-dioxide emissions and improper waste removal techniques. A perfect remedy for this is to impose heavy fines on industries who do not comply with the set rules and regulations laid to save our planet.
To conclude, migrations increasing is definitely causing a concern of increasing population, increasing infrastructure prices, a step forward to global warming but measures can be taken to minimize these.
- Some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical but give more practical training throughout their courses 80
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- In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16964285714 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14527859235 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.234870543 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0769230769 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194688664866 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551707650682 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534720433029 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957534626056 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355818129617 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 57.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.