ADULTS DO LESS EXERCISE NOWADAYS. some thinks thta people can be encouraged to live healthy lives through sporting events such as olympics or the world cup.
others thinks that there are better ways to encourage adults for exercise.discuss both views and state your opinion
Adults do less exercise nowadays,people can be encouraged to live healthy through neither sporting events such as olympics or world cup sports nor encouraged through daily exercise.
By my personal point of view daily exercise is better than sporting events they can lead to live more healthy and fit.
Firstly adults gets obesity due to less work out or exercise nowadays, daily exercise brings them into fit and makes them brisk.by getting their daily exercise accomplished they cannot get involved in any health issues
daily exercise is more important in our day to day lives which gives more benefits.they,relaxes and makes our body flexible,doing of exercise improves our concentration power and keeps our body vaporizer less (sweat glans)
exercise can be classified into many types such as GYM,YOGA,AEROBICS ect .....Daily exercise increases your immunity and metabolism level and keeps them equal where we find our body stable and healthy .
Healthy lives through sports events such as Olympics and world cup games can also been classified as exercise,but sports games and Olympic games are more concentrated on their specified sports.some sports leads the players in minor healthy issues
we find Olympic athletics runners more passionate and he runs for his country. some people haven't noticed that their body conditions abnormal,very lean and many basket ball player found very tall and finally rugby players in fat.we find by comparing
they are normal.so sporting events are only concerted on their games not more in exercise
To conclude,An hour of exercise keeps doctors away.daily exercise is more important in our day to day live consequently sporting events are only concentrated on their specified sports not more involved in exercise.
exercise keeps you more healthy and fit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56382978723 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89060623228 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514184397163 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 47.0 20.5024630542 229% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 213.495836545 50.4703680194 423% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.5 104.977214359 249% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.0 20.9669160288 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.12807881773 242% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331744760691 0.242375264174 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223708899422 0.0925447433944 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175188441928 0.071462118173 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160978152339 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156497068086 0.0609392437508 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 12.6369458128 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.31 53.1260098522 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.9458128079 208% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.3980295567 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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