The belching and unauthorized behaviour is unacceptable in modern offices. How far do you support this view. Give your response with justification.
Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals belching and unauthorized behaviour is unacceptable in modern offices. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain whether these should be accepted in modern offices or not. I would say these kind of behaviour should not be accepted in offices and I will discuss reasons to behind this argument in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are enormous reasons behind this issue. Firstly, belching behaviour create unfriendly environment between the employees and it also leads to bad effects on the customers. For example, sometime if a customer come in the office so in that time if employees show their belching behavoiur eventually companies have face great loss.
In addition to it, unauthorized behaviour create conflicts between the employees of office as well as many arguments. These kind of person feel loneliness into the office because other employees do not have interested to talk with friendly way so in this case they have not perform better task into office. Companies can face great loss regarding their selling properties and products because worker show unauthorized behaviour.
In conclusion, belching and unthorized behaviour have a bad habbit of person which leads to unfriendly environment into the office.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: faced
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'performed'.
Suggestion: performed
...endly way so in this case they have not perform better task into office. Companies can ...
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37899543379 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80246282356 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0542048097 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.090909091 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182276793312 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768034433287 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682137067656 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107452086986 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284825440293 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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