Some people consider careful planning as a key to success while others believe that it comes from taking risks. Which one do you consider important?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals a key to success from taking risks has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People has always been intrigued to analyse and explain the planning as a key to success. Regarding this, I would like to say that planning is a key of success. Let's deeply explain it in forthcoming paragraph.
One compelling argument in favor of my stance on this issue has to do with the fact that masses consider careful planing as a key to success and it is really true. This is because, if people have full plan about their life then they can go with a life circle. Moving ahead, human being can do something new in their life with the help of daily plan. However, people can get their goal from their childhood because they starts thinking about their life from their childhood.
On the flip side of the topic, others people believe that success comes from taking risks. Moreover, masses think success is not attained without taking any risk. Moving ahead, illiterate people fear from risk and they do not want to take it. However, one's feel they loss their money, respect, time, and so on to take a risk step.
Hence, based on the arguments above,we can concluded that people are successful who consider careful planning from their school time and go in their life step to step.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68503937008 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33821148198 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547244094488 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6315887417 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329229938396 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121275410005 0.0925447433944 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895571861779 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200196106792 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409015538197 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.5 Out of 90
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