Business whether big or small is to maximize profit. Do you agree with that? Give your opinion.
Recently, the phenomenon of vast businesses and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matters of small enterprises are highly profitable, such an issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to conceive that maximum profits can be a plus, and I will investigate that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, sophisticated businesses can provide the society with noticeable effects, which are rooted in the fact that merits, as well as advantages of low unemployment, are crucial. According to my own experience, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the importance of professional employees. Thus, beneficial ramifications of profitable enterprises are visible.
From a scientific point of view, small businesses can provide the community with negative impacts that are related to the reality that demerits of inefficient businesses are remarkable. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university described minimum profits. Hence, predicted outcomes of economic growth are noticeable.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of big and small businesses far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do advantages of affordable goods prove the significance of sophisticated businesses, but also pinpoint possible implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91121495327 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40994727437 2.71678728327 126% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672897196262 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8818100762 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165696244467 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497098479702 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440726142423 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890183727065 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191155630698 0.0609392437508 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 11.5310837438 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.0 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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