In cashless society, people use more credit cards. Cashless society seems to be a reality, and how realistic do you think so? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
In recent years, the importance of people using credit cards sparked heated debate. Although such issued is contested by many, it is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by substantial number of individuals. In my opinion I am inclined to believe that credit cards are more beneficiary, and I will elaborate in this essay.
To begin with, it is convenient for those people, who don’t want to carry cash with them for any reason. Another benefit from credit cards is that middle class people won’t have enough money to buy any products, so though credit card they can buy easily. Additionally credit cards are the best way to do online shopping and buy products cheaper than shop price. For example, if I want to buy a mobile phone on equal monthly installments, credit card is must required. According to a research held in university of California, 67% of California city population have credit cards.
As every positivism carries some sorts of negativity, so there are some demerits also. One major disadvantage is it creates economic burden on society. For example, bank provide credit limit depending upon the monthly income of person and he has to pay interest on it. It also attracts people to buy luxurious products which are not affordable to middle class person.
In conclusion, although there are some non-negligible negative impacts of credit cards but still advantages of credit cards overweight the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22457627119 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86242535018 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652542372881 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.070787357 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.8461538462 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143114766508 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514179654433 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335156353407 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863171577026 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120697166659 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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