Cities are now expanding; the government should make better network for public transport or should build more roads to facilitate car ownership? Agree or Disagree?
recently, the phenomenon of travelling by public transport and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. although contested by many thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that private transport can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
from a social standpoint, road networks can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of transport developments, as well as transport strategies, are inextricably bound up. according to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the transport system. thus, beneficial ramifications of both road accidents and rail transport apparently can be seen.
within the realm of science, n rod facilities might increase the consequences of V requirement. moreover, the fundamental aspects of n could relate to this reality in the fact that the demerits of the role of transport pertain to the role of road. as a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of n is correlated negatively with road safety. hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of air transport.
to conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I extremely believe that the benefits of transport issue far outweigh its drawbacks. not only do the advantages of public transport prove the significance of traffic congestion but also, pinpoint the role of traffic implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42338709677 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26731111624 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620967741935 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0152213886 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123308050457 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417737708217 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268937476435 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704824064301 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179930500613 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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