The claim that animals have 'rights' has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?
The zoos are great places to visit and explore the different variety of animals with family and friends. Some people believes that zoos are the greatest place to protect and nurture the extinction animals, where as some other people like animal protection right wing believes that zoos hurting the animals and they want to ban the zoos. Here by I'll discuss the whether the zoos are helping the animals or hurting them as below.
Firstly, zoos are excellent place to protect the extinction animals and nurture them to increase their population. For instance, the tiger population is reduced drastically over the world due to hunting. There species will be ended soon, if this species is not protected and nurtured. So this reason the zoo's become safest location to nurture the endanger species.
Secondly, some animal right wing people argue that, zoos are hurting the animals and do not have freedom as human have. For example, all the animals are kept in closed fences and does not allowed to freely walk around any place, which leads to captivity nature and their nature of attitude will be changed. So it’s important to have larger place for each species to thrive
without any restriction.
If you compare the above discussed points, zoos have important role to play in protecting the animal. In my opinion zoos needs to be promoted to protect the animals.
To recapitulate, the zoos are great place to protect and nurture the animals, so it should not be banned.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97590361446 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37057356739 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538152610442 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4824278849 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3076923077 104.977214359 91% => OK
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Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
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What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.116481458452 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764119859442 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1462590167 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088524613316 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 74.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.0 Out of 90
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