Recently, the phenomenon of introducing various offers and discounts as a common marketing strategy and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that these strategies are highly beneficial, such issues are regarded thoroughly negative by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that these common strategies can be plus, and I will analyze them throughout this essay.
From Economists standpoint, introducing various offers on a product sale can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that different offers for sale the product, as well as more sale, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered advantages of introducing various suggestions for sale the products.
Within the realm of products with high price, discounts might decrease the negative consequences of high prices. Moreover, fundamental aspects of low sale in large companies related to this reality that demerits of heavy prices pertain to less purchase from people. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of selling the expensive products is correlated negatively with lack of purchasing power from people.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of common marketing strategies far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63043478261 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09346833082 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639130434783 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.5418872352 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.888888889 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232862641614 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882114276062 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618036166691 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124009567217 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631490160776 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 53.1260098522 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.92 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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