In this day and age, the new technologies have changed the ways of communication in the past decade. although this great change regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive among the public, there are many people hold an opposing viewpoint. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some of the positive and negative effects of this change.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support or disagreement with this significant change. On the one hand, communication with recent technologies became easier than before. After appearing the smartphones and social networks like Skype by using the Internet, relationships became faster in last 10 years. For example, in the past, people should send letter together to connect to each other in the far distances, while nowadays, people can make a video call with their families in another side of the world.
On the other hand, despite the ease of communication, these facilities also can make people away from each other, if people become dependent on them. this dependence is harmful to families. For instance, while the family members live in a home, but dependency more than usual to this technologies can make away the family members from each other emotionally.
In conclusion, while this remarkable change in communication has been very useful for human's life, it can be harmful, if we do not learn right use of it in our living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05627705628 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79516270371 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627705627706 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.71428571429 408% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2806601069 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.181818182 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232805414252 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903708094133 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630092661512 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131714861521 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726127998568 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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