Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss
In today’s world, top management are now involving their workers’ advice in most of the decisions. some advocates that taking their personnel consent in decision-making is very beneficial for the business. However, others do not take this notion as positive development. this essay will assert both the side before giving any appropriate conclusion.
To commence with, many people think this a positive development as per new era of trading. There is a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous reason that workers think that their ideas and sessions are very important which feel them a part of organisation. For and instance, research conducted at Western Sydney University reveals that more than 70% of higher authorities taking employee’s participation in their decision-making. As a result, production for these trades are booming a lot.
On the other side, others reject this notion and do not take as a positive development. top management should not involve them in some critical decisions which could be harmful in today’s competitive market. For illustrate, most of the trades were dissolved by their co-workers due to integrity issue. Thus, higher authorities should pay more concentration while adopting such ideas and notions.
now, in competitive market, business runs on the equal participation by both employers and employees. To conclude it, I pen down by saying that top management should play smartly while taking their personnel’s opinions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, thus, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54310344828 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24700310009 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8259630831 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7333333333 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4666666667 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213956878754 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623471805584 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579523677599 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134204132046 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350037778692 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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