In the competition for consumerism, natural resources are fast depleting and run the risk of disappearing from the face of the Earth.
What steps do you think governments and people should take to protect and preserve the natural resources?
Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
In every part of the world, there are some places of natural beauty such as beaches, lakes and mountains, which are the main attraction for people to go there and enjoy the natural beauty. Nowadays, many people are destroying this natural beauty because they throw plastic bags, cans, bottles and other garbage at these places. But It is the duty of every person to save this beautiful environment with love and care. I discuss my views in following passages.
In my opinion, a healthy environment give us safe life and protect us from many diseases. Moreover, natural beauty teach us that how to live a happy life and how can we use natural resources to make our life wonderful. On these kind of places like beaches, lakes and mountains, people go for enjoying with family and friends and spend alot of time there to get happiness and for a relax mood.
In another words, people should take care of this natural beauty as they care about their home, they should avoid to destroy it's beauty with plastic bags, cans, bottles and other garbage to throw there.
Overall, it should be cure by everone and must be take care by .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...esources to make our life wonderful. On these kind of places like beaches, lakes and mount...
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Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... of time there to get happiness and for a relax mood. In another words, people should...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid destroying'.
Suggestion: avoid destroying
...they care about their home, they should avoid to destroy its beauty with plastic bags, cans, bot...
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Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cure by everone and must be take care by .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 1207.87684729 77% => OK
No of words: 199.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65829145729 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24476613481 2.71678728327 83% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577889447236 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 379.143842365 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4688094149 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165858698199 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632448138181 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042901777505 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964489604331 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261795687668 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.32886699507 82% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 55.0591133005 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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