In the competition for consumerism, natural resources are fast depleting and run the risk of disappearing from the face of the Earth.
What steps do you think governments and people should take to protect and preserve the natural resources?
Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
In bygone days people lived in a simple life and not used to much natural resources and they are not fast depleting but now people are living in modern era many changes have taken place and consumption of the natural Resources like petrol, diesel, Liquid petroleum gas raised day by day. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my points of views on this topic and suggest some idea's to protect them.
To begin with, natural resources are plays a vital role in the human life and it is very difficult to survive without natural resources. But nowadays natural resources use in a large quantity and its Wastage also become rise, due to this its quantity become less. For save natural resources government should be take good steps.
The first and foremost point, government should provide good instruction about natural resources to every individual, how to use them and how much quantity they are remaining. People use them in a good way, some of the people not have a good knowledge about the how to use them. Moreover, young blood, people use their automobile more and more without any work their parents should give them instruction about the depletion of the natural resources and they avoid to use automobile more and more.
As per my notion. needless to say, natural resources are fast depleting and run the risk of disappearing from the face of the earth. So every people should use them in good way and government have a significant role to save the natural resources by giving the instruction to every individual.
To conclude, for saving the natural resources step should be taken out by every individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ould be taken out by every individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94244604317 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5263171515 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489208633094 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6120469213 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341133814353 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151876496806 0.0925447433944 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121853833481 0.071462118173 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2231530756 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784765804654 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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