In many countries, college education is closely associated with part time work. Teenagers earn their living expenses while they undergo formal education at school/college. In many other countries, however, teenagers are expected to concentrate only on their academics, without the distraction of a regular job.
Which system do you consider in the better interest of the teenagers? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Now, people are living in modern era . Some of the people are argument that in many nations, college education is closely associated with part time work and others have opinion that youngers are expected to concentrate only on their academics, without the distraction of a regular job. In the following paragraphs I will analysis both sides and after that give a compartable advice.
To begin with, nowadays people are living in the expensive world and for the lower class and medium class families, it is very difficult to pay the collage fees of their children. Therefore it is inevitable for students to contemplate on the other source of money. So most of the students specially in the developed countries, students do part time job with education. In this way they become responsible as well as they pay their collages fees. Students become punctual and they do every work at proper time.
However, some others people have different opinion with the part time job students do not concentrate on their main motive that is education. In this competitive world it is very difficult to get a jobs.
As per my notion, doing a part time job with study is good in this way students learn so many distinct things and become responsible and their study will go in a good way. They make a good management in wich they give proper time to their study.
To conclude, needless to say part time job in good at the time of education in developed country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58420652985 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496031746032 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3967349762 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1538461538 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300202648023 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10066641657 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08606326237 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16953796634 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052287158172 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.