A competitive environment in school and university would bring excellence and need to be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree？
In today's world, competition has surged in every field including school and universities. This essay will discuss why competitive environment should be encouraged and how it will be helpful to bring excellence.
First of all, the origin of competition comes from highly talented individuals. These people are hard working and strive for the success. It is axiomatic that they will motivate other students also to work hard and thus making a positive environment for the learnings. For example, all students in world's top universities like Oxford University, Stanford University have students from all over the worls but they have one thing in them which is common - briliance and at the top of the competition.
Moreover, introducing competition in school and university makes students to accept and conquer life challanges they face later in life. Competition makes them to efficiently handel pressure and produce a zeal to solve complex situations within them. For instance job of a financial analyst is much harder than studying about it as there will be many unwanted and new situations which needs to be solved.
In a nutshell, competition makes students to use their excellence and intelligence more by pushing their limits.This pressure is prudent and yeilds great results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...telligence more by pushing their limits.This pressure is prudent and yeilds great re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34975369458 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93366688363 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.138487188 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179700158938 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662136330427 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447169894222 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109295127516 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554216072834 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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