Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person's influence on the region he belongs to?
In the view of many people, the success of a person is often affected by the region he belongs to. This essay will discuss about the role of a native region in the success of a person and that person's influence on that region.
First and foremost, In my opinion, native region plays a significant role in a person's success and in his life also. Because most of the people get their basic education and lifestyle from their native region in their early life which then influence them while taking critical decisions. For example, Martin Luther King Jr. had not be such a great influencal personality if he didn’t have suffered the inequality in his childhood.On the second note, I would like to point out that many regions offer conditions suitable for the execution of a revolutionary idea while some regions simply can not. One fine example of this would be the success of jeff bezzos, founder of amazon.com which is the largest online marketplace right now. He saw an opportunity, knew what to do and how to do and most importantly had the resources from the highly advanced region of earth i.e. USA.
Successful people always have a great influence on the region they belong to. To illustrate this Kalpana chawala would be the best personality. Despite belonging a backward region she worked hard to become the NASA astronaut and become a source of inspiration for the entire nation she belonged to originally.
In a nutshell, the region plays an important role in a person’s success and that successful person creates a huge influence over that region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, then, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88059701493 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70900661931 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9701490345 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.909090909 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.545067059199 0.242375264174 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222314144779 0.0925447433944 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155875683689 0.071462118173 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.381456493477 0.151781067708 251% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142592157805 0.0609392437508 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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