“Computer technology has had more of a negative that a positive impact on society.” How far do you agree with this statement? Support your views with reason and /or examples from your own experiences.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about either computer technology has negative or positive impact on society. While some progressively adore the ideology that it has more positive affects, others undoubtedly despise it. This essay will prudently persuade both positive and negative impacts of computer technology on society and will conclude that negative impacts are more severe.
Invention of computer was one of the evolutionary events of 20th century. But with the passage of time, its development started in negative direction. Making of atomic bomb which can destroy whole world has been possible because of computer. As per Atomic Energy Commission survey there are more than 5000 atomic bombs which is very big threat for world. So keeping in mind this perspective of computer technology one can say that it has severe negative impact on human life.
While some people argue about the positive side of computer that it has made human life easier, they ignore the fact that human life was better before computer. Because of computer these days more people are jobless and unhappy than ever before. So this may be the other negative aspect of computer technology on society.
While there are valid arguments on both sides of the case, I strongly agree with the statement that computer technology has more negative impacts on society than its positive impacts.
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| 2018-07-14 | Muhammad Ishaq | 72 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18666666667 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43389237617 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551111111111 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8639404168 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 7.25397266985 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251924036769 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989426567839 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746409840178 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173401920604 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585348152993 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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