The cost of traveling is normally much higher than the cost of staying at home. Do you think traveling is necessary for good quality of life?
Now we are dwelling in the 21st century, and travelling has become the mandatory part of life. People are doing more travel as compared to past. The cost of roaming is higher than the amount of staying at home. I believe that the journey is most important for superior life.
To the begin with, a variety of reasons can be offered to explain why I think a tour is crucial for a better lifestyle. First and foremost, living in one place for a long time is hard for a person. Everyone wants a change in their life. So, roaming from one place to another keeps happy with people. Secondly, the scope of business has expanded nowadays. People have to do the meetings with their clients, and it is possible with going at their place. For instance, the entrepreneur can obtain the orders from their customers by visiting at their companies.
However, on the other hand, as every coin has flip sides, so as this matter has some diametrically opposite views. There are other schools of thoughts who think the value of travelling is tremendously high than the staying at home. The hotel stay and food expenses are high, and people have to pay so much for their accommodation. Some countries are growing because if travelling.
To put it into the nutshell, as I have established my viewpoints, travelling plays vital contribution to modern life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... most important for superior life. To the begin with, a variety of reasons can be offer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71794871795 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62128544985 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606837606838 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.238529696 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.0 104.977214359 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305890546041 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907811459315 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959820401717 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183989533495 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114902727853 0.0609392437508 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 12.6369458128 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 11.5310837438 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.5 Out of 90
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