The cost of traveling is normally much higher than the cost of staying at home. Do you think traveling is necessary for good quality of life?
Travelling has been became the mandatory part of life. This is the backbone of the business. People are doing more travel as compare to past. The cost of roaming is higher than amount of dwelling at home. I believe journey is most important for superior animation.
To begin with, a variety of reasons can be offered to explain why I think tour is crucial for better lifestyle. First and foremost, living at one place for a long time is really hard. Everyone want a change in their life. So, roaming from one place to another keeps happy to people. Secondly, the scope of business has been expand now a days. People have to do the meetings with their clients and this is only possible with travelling. For instance, an entrepreneur can collect the orders from the customers by visiting at their place.
However, on the other hand, as every coin has flip sides, so as this matter has some diametrically opposite views. There are other schools of thoughts who think the value of travelling is tremendously high than the staying at home. The hotel stay, food expenses are higher and people have to pay so much for their accommodation. Some countries are growing because if travelling.
To put it into the nutshell, as I have established my view points, travelling is required for a good life but it is a bit expensive.
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| 2019-03-07 | ddk0014 | 55 | view |
| 2018-01-24 | Sneh Kakkar | 67 | view |
| 2018-01-24 | Sneh Kakkar | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
Travelling has been became the mandatory part of life. This is the...
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Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...or a long time is really hard. Everyone want a change in their life. So, roaming fro...
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Line 2, column 324, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'expanded'.
Suggestion: expanded
...econdly, the scope of business has been expand now a days. People have to do the meeti...
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Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
..., the scope of business has been expand now a days. People have to do the meetings with th...
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Line 2, column 335, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...e scope of business has been expand now a days. People have to do the meetings with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i think, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68534482759 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60974560949 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3889323141 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.9411764706 104.977214359 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6470588235 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323187669264 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856405131129 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890988361995 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193154379195 0.151781067708 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856573157477 0.0609392437508 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 12.6369458128 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 11.5310837438 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.5 Out of 90
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