Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. Whether you support them or not?
Thrilling sports are often prone to be dangerous due to their high level of risks, although they bring fun and excitement for participants. However, the safety of these activities has been recently led to a contentious discussion on whether they should be supported or put under carefully scrutinise by government and authorities. As far as I am concerned, the danger of these activities is believed to positively improve our active life rather than harming our body. In this essay, I shall provide the relevant evidences and draw an appropriate conclusion on this matter.
To begin with, skiing and bungee jumping are extreme sports which help us to release our stress and intension effectively. Despite the potential injuries from them, they vastly boost up our physics to the next level of human appearance. Furthermore, due to the fast changing world, we are often lazy and lack of outdoor activities, hence a thrilling game would satisfy our weak body and reshape it to become better. Enjoying danger sports is not only for the sake of fun but also helps us relax mentally and physically.
In conclusion, extreme activities may cause several injuries and concerns to our health and safety, though they will be more likely to enhance our development and well-being to a next level if we can control and participate them carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06787330317 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82264459973 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674208144796 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4931525759 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.444444444 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180251850717 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636176603777 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474926932094 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111680912491 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01313388752 0.0609392437508 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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