In developing countries, tourism has disadvantages or advantages?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the pros and cons of tourism in under developed countries. Some people think that developing countries are extremely benefitted by tourism while others maintain that tourism has numerous disadvantages. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism for developing countries.
At the outset, there are myriad of advantages associated with tourism for developing countries. Firstly, the most conspicuous is that the influx of tourists accelerates and promotes local business which eventually augments the economy of the country. Moreover, tourism provides and opens more jobs and ventures for the locale. As an example, for developing countries like Thailand, tourism is now one of the major economy booster. As a matter of fact, tourism not only generates more job venues but also accelerates the economy of the under developed countries.
On the other hand, tourism also posses some burdens and proves as disadvantageous for developing countries. The government of under developed country is not only required to meet the demands of its citizens but also the inundation of tourists adds up towards more demanding situation, for example, in terms of basic neccessities like food and accomodation. As a result, local government will have to play a pivotal role to provide basic commodities to both the citizens as well as the tourists.
To recapitulate, the aforementioned discussion propounds the view that tourism has both pros and cons for developing countries, however, acceleration of economy and generation of more employments for local population makes the advantages triumph over disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... basic commodities to both the citizens as well as the tourists. To recapitulate, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, so, well, while, for example, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59073359073 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11330532643 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528957528958 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.700173917 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.25397266985 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468343029718 0.242375264174 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211037043414 0.0925447433944 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168221358987 0.071462118173 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31450613007 0.151781067708 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133677202703 0.0609392437508 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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