Different people are successful in different fields. Some people work long hours to get success, but others feel that we should spend free time for fun than money. Which style closely related to you and explains your opinion?
The influence of successful people in different fields, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of work long hours to get success or spend enough time with family and get success has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on people's thinking in recent years. It can be agreed that work long hours to get success has some positive effects, but some people claim that it also has some negative effects as well. This essay will elaborate how success can be achieved, and thus will lead to a plausible conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why people should work long hours to get success, but the most conspicuous one stems on the fact that people can concentrate more and be able to focus in one thing at one time, can encourage them to get success in their life. For example, my friend Himanshu is doing master degree with research in chemical engineering and he spends most of his time doing his practical instead of having fun with family which get him Doctor degree quicker than other students. people should work long hours to get success, therefore, can play vital role in successful stories.
On the contrary, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that spend free time for fun than money is also a significant for the successful as there are innumerable reasons for that, but the most predominant one lies in the fact that fun makes people more concentrated. For instance, according to the research QUT University, it has been proved.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that, the importance of working long hours to get success is prominent, although there are number of drawbacks those should not be over-looked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...tor degree quicker than other students. people should work long hours to get success, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90604026846 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58030780701 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526845637584 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2182560865 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.2 104.977214359 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.9669160288 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450572556974 0.242375264174 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183429073188 0.0925447433944 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924690932392 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261497209015 0.151781067708 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828279306278 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.1260098522 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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