Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products , or is it the responsibility of producers?
In this globalized villages people use more packed products, as the world is running behind the money and business. People prefer to the packaged food items, these may lead to many health issues in the future. The essay will discuss whether the consumers or the producers are responsible to avoid over packaged products.
At the outset, it is clearly evident that, wherever we go to the supermarkets,there will be a minimum number od products we purchase is over-packaged ones. there are numerous reasons why people are attracted by those products. For instance, the people think, the quality of the products is based on the the price and the attractive lables made by the company. Although, it is a business trick, people belive that over-packaging can prevent the food-items from early degradation.
Though there are any companies and organizations are developing the food-items with different quality, the prime of them is to get their products get proper marketing. but, in the same way we can get the same products with same quality and quantity with the same price, but packing cannot lure us easily. there are many products with good packaging to attract the child, but he seeing the glitters on the cover, children get attracted to that and start fierce their parents. All <a>attract</a>these factors can cause a plethora of problems to the environment because of the improper degradation of materials.
In conclusion, the product quality is not depending on the cover outside the product or the number of covering over the products. The quality i<a>quality</a>s depends on the ingredients and quantity of the item. So,in my opinion, people should be aware of the myriad of marketing strategy which lure us with packaging and should not be deceived by the companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13058419244 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97392850897 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1758391796 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233863076817 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077853545244 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094473926282 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139286482678 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516785687726 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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