Do you think that consumers should avoid over packed product or it is the responsibility of the producers?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals that packed products has been one of the prominent topic of discussion. In this essay i will discuss some responsibilitys of coustmers and the producers.
To begin with, there are ample of factors are associated to this phenomenon. Plastic is difficult to decompose and it is a major issue. Furthermore, packed products create pollution and due to this our society can suffer from various diseases. What is more, it also give birth to land and water pollution.
Nevertheless, packed products create plethora of problems to the buyers by making the product more expensive. So coustmers should carry their own bags when they go for shopping. Moreover, companies and manufactures should ignore the packed products because it will lead to various problems. Thus, it is harmful for our environment.
To sum up, i firmly believe, undoubtedly, there are ample of demerits of this trend which are unavoidable and it is the responsibility of both coustmers and the producers to avoid packed products.
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| 2019-06-20 | gurwinder singh sandhu | 55 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, to begin with, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 1207.87684729 80% => OK
No of words: 187.0 242.827586207 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14973262032 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97309852203 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631016042781 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 379.143842365 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8894444405 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21513063668 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630197874177 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633386672572 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120679992425 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517891434509 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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