Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solution can be proposed by government and individuals?
The importance of Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion .the substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years .in my opinion ,the former /latter proposition appears to be more rational .this essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive /negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion .
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that such as issues as hatred of foreign people and culture another pivotal aspect of this trend is that Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries needless to say ,all these merits stand in a good /bad stead .
Elaborating my viewpoint ,there are some more merits /demerits but one of the crucial effects is that government individuals besides organize awareness programs hence it is apparent why many man are against in favor of this trend .
According to the arguments aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits drawbacks of government and individuals are indeed to great dire to ignore .?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, so, thus, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30622009569 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80368574387 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.5024630542 254% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.664640527 50.4703680194 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 277.25 104.977214359 264% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.25 20.9669160288 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.25397266985 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.33497536946 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154843899077 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960765112338 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370293393366 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960765112338 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370293393366 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.7 12.6369458128 235% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.24 53.1260098522 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 10.9458128079 227% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.94827586207 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.3980295567 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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