The rise of convenience food has helped people to keep up with the speed of modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages overweigh the disadvantages?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of the people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals that fast food is one of the most prominent topics of the contemporary discussion. The following paragraphs will provide merits band demerits of this trend and will give a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, in this modern era both the parents are working, due to this most of the families are dependent no the fast food. Moreover, it save the time and energy of a person. Furthermore, in the western world online availability of food is very secure and fast. As a result most of the people prefer to eat fast food.
On the flip side of the issue, every rose flower has a bush of thrones, over usage of convenience food can give birth to some obesity which can lead a person to some serious ailments. For example, according a research in united states most of the people suffer from diseases are related to obesity. Lastly, it can cause the health related issues.
To conclude, there are ample of the benefits of the fast food and it is easily available. However, there are ample of the demerits which are unavoidable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, lastly, moreover, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70192307692 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58158304261 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572115384615 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4541574114 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132553939142 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428374660759 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403678845133 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715640675352 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405721927618 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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